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Hey G3 I developed a discord bot made after Sunny, I was wondering if you'd like to try it out [img=fp][img=Feeling it] Although it might still need a bit of tweaking, I'd like if you could try my work out [img=Relaxed]

You smoke weed?

Well I just started reading the novel so I can't be sure of it's quality later on. But I can say with certainty that the only chapter uploaded makes the novel look promising. My only issue? It's too long.. Seriously chapter one is too damn long. It's supposed to be an introduction...... About the MC "Vasco", I can see that he's trying to bring the world to order. But how exactly? And what is wrong with the world now that needs his help to fix? "We weren't told." Well the novel is good and do know that this is just the review for chapter one. Thank you all and good night 😎

Reduce the words. it's too long for an opening chapter

I'M FIRST!!!!

why do you keep using **asterisks**, wouldn't quotation marks be better?

Nah..... They didn't fall, they flew away. Shouldn't the plane have exploded like I mean, the fuel???

Naofumi kun why??!!😭😭

Strippers bruh[img=Shocked]

CRITICAL HIT!! INSTANT K.O