Whadyamean
Hello I’m the guy who makes fics on surprisingly non findable things. I am also somehow the top supporter of my SCP fic despite not putting any powerstones in it.
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Does this limitation mean that the threats and enemies he’ll face will be more stunted in growth and potential allowing the MC to outscale then easier? Cause if not then this really has no reason to exist except for plot.
Are we just revealing our trump cards every fight now? This is a fight, not show and tell, these fight scenes would be infinitely better if you didn’t just go, “Ha ha I have you now, now the way I did it was through-“. For a supposed perspeceptive person the MC sure is showing that through being told what their openents moves are, without discoverying anything of their own.
Who could’ve thought that by getting the person who seemingly gets more powerful the more angry they got madder was a bad idea? Certainly not the MC.
“And since I have gained the upper hand I shall monlphue like a dumb*ss telling you of one of my special powrs, and allow you to completely turn the advantage against me in the time I’ve spoken.”
“I need to finish this.” *Proceeds to monologue like a 3rd rate villian
Hey man psychiatrists are in really high demand, you should be happy you have a locally avaliable one.
In one sentence you’ve made a persons’ feelings in a situation like reincarnation more real than most authors try in a whole prologue.
A lazy smart person will always find the most efficient way to do something. He just had to learn how to kill everyone with enough time to have an extended lunch break.
Harry is definitely getting Dumbledore vibes with how closely the Ancient One is acting to him.
SWEET HOME ALABAMA
Xenophobia is a HUGE thing in Star Wars. Most officers in the comics and shows are human, diplomats and political figures are usually human (unless the planet they represent isn’t mainly humans). It’s not obvious but being human is a great thing, plus they’re literally everywhere so going on an undercover mission won’t give you away.
*What the nextdoor neighbour sees outsideafter the first truck hit
Hope he learned some spells to detect foreign substances in his food and drink from then on.
Isn’t that permanent physical harm? As cutting off years of someones lifespan is still a permanent injury.
I can already feel the possible plot of one of these being stolen and someone starting a new jedi order to combat his sith one.
Pretty stupid scapegoat considering its a 10 year old child. No one would believe you if you pinned it on them.
I don’t have it on hand, you can easily find it if you search it up tho.
He dosen’t need to know how to drive a tank if he becomes one.
This is such a boring way to do this. This efefctively tether Jon to the plot as if he derails it away from continuity he won’t get anymore points from it.
That’s not at all what Hestia is related to. Hearth and Home does not relate to guidance and direction. Dosen’t really matter, but please if your going to do mythological stuff look into it just a little bit.