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I must admit that this has been bothering me a lot. I feel like the author is going on too long in certain parts, which makes the reading a bit slow. In addition, the writing seems excessively detailed at times, including information that doesn't add much to the narrative. Another issue that has caught my attention is the repetition of words and ideas. An example of this is the conversation with Coulson: first, he states that "the rumor of the flying horse has to do with the terrorist", and then the journalist responds "I see, so the sighting of the flying horse has to do with this terrorist you're talking about", as if she hadn't just heard the same information. This type of repetition occurs in several chapters, which leads me to suspect that the writing may have been generated by artificial intelligence. If this is the case, I recommend a more careful review to avoid this type of problem and make the reading more fluid.

yes lol, but I think it's so funny that I don't even care

Shiro, no game no life

I feel like this chapter is out of order too

currently chapter 39, the story is very pleasant so far, nothing that bothers you too much and the translator is doing a good job seeing that so far I haven't seen any racism or extreme Chinese patriotism like what normally happens, so it's good so far.

Well, I thought the last 2 chapters were weird, they're out of order, translator-san

I'm just not going to continue because of the videos that the protagonist sends to Tony Stark of him with Maria, that really bothers me and leaves a smell of NTR. (it's very strange to me, but the work was interesting until then)

God bless brother

Well, I really liked the dark vibe of this work, but as you said, I think my problem is with the protagonist and the dialogues in general. When I read them, everything feels very… cartoonish, I guess. The dialogues don’t sound natural; they feel forced. But as I mentioned, I really liked the overall atmosphere of the story. I just couldn’t connect with the dialogues and the protagonist.

said he wouldn't be able to surpass the power? potential of the model, but would it be able to learn, for example, the reverse technique? I think it has more to do with the person than the power of the model itself, right?