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Every little girl dreams of being a princess, of castles in the clouds and magical kingdoms beyond the horizon. And sometimes, just sometimes, dreams do come true. With destiny calling her name.
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EXCUSE ME.... WHAT??!
I would have put a comma between “fine” and the rest of that sentence, it reads so much easier.
Thank you on your feedback, I will definitely remember it and give the next chapters a heading like you suggested. I appreciate the time you took to read, comment and review this story!
This story is written in an emotional way, the first chapter alone makes you feel the exact same feelings as the main character Emily. It’s written really well and got me wondering what will happen next.
The way this chapter is written makes me really feel the tears in my eyes while ready this, Poor Emily...