Diego_6162

Comrade, relax a little, the fact that you take a fiction novel so seriously and that you don't like his work is no reason for you to start attacking the author and associating him with such degrading adjectives.

This is definitely an MTL, the name of the protagonist, his speech, behavior and aspirations................very simple and without substance.

It is literally the best HxH fic I have ever read and it would be a shame if you left it here, I really hope it continues because the story is getting very interesting.

It's a good what-if story, why was it removed earlier? Will you upload it in full? The last time I read it I stayed when they invade Italy, what chapter is it?. Google translator.

It's obvious that they haven't seen Naruto, and even in the fic they take the time to explain that Orochimaru used very low quality bodies to revive Gensou and the Kages, which is why he can't use his full power.

The truth is that I like this story and I think it could use a revision, to improve its quality in terms of narrative and writing, improving its experience for more demanding readers, although personally I think that only a few things need to be improved and that The plot It's good.

The chapter is good, the premise is interesting, I want more of this, I hope it doesn't fall, because I really feel like this has potential. I've read several novels but this is one of the most promising I've seen, it just needs to keep updating and show brilliance.

Take your time, it's better than canceling.

It's always good to take a break, it helps both mentally and physically, to rest and relax, to beat up the trolls.

Thanks for chapter