Ruzzzy

I think it's worth building a good story for one world first, before getting into the omniverse:)

your opinion is very important for the story that has been published for more than a year

It's written interestingly, but because of this I gave up after 5 chapters, because it's very inconvenient to read

Thx :) good luck

Just have to be consistent, you yourself wrote earlier that Carol knows his identity and he told that it would be more convenient for him, but in this chapter she doesn’t know and he erases her memories... what’s the point?

Her name is Cho Chang. I think it should be changed to how it was in the books.

Honestly, it was extremely far-fetched and it was unclear where it came from and why..

another good translation of a good story from this guy, interesting to read and nothing frustrating, among a bunch of trashy translations this is like a hidden gem:)

Ok, dropped[img=faceslap]