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I am imagining something like this
keep writing it good work
you are right I never properly watched the sinnoh series just initial episodes , movies and the last tournament matches Punish me for the sin I have committed
He is about 9 I think it's time for him to act more maturish
It was such an awkward chapter instead of just singing praises of trainer they should have talked about daily life and his clumsiness or his bout of matureness as well as childishness And how these act give them a sense of belonging in the family there interaction with gengar and other evee should also have been discussed specifically by nyx as they played together since birth Atleast you tried
Author your last 2 stories includes op mc from the start and he keeps getting stronger if you start another fanfic you should move out of your comfort zone So I challenge you write hp/naruto fanfic(cause it's popular) with weak to strong mc no cheats average background determined mc with proper training montage and as an elder of no harem sect there should not be any harem It would be fun to see you write something like that
you should write your own fanfic it would sell better
Me seeing during my leg week That's me alright
Both of them have pseudo legendory and I bet ur speed of evolving pokemon is faster than that of Steven or cynthia