Unknown here, An interesting concept really, I'd never consider making the MC... anyway it's a good read, I love the mystique and build up towards the MC being found. Unknown out.

air bubble ?

A solid first chapter, yes a bit cliche but it's cliche done right. I love the fact that the story starts after he dies instead of seeing him before he died

Said I'd be here bruv

Unknown here , A really good read, a different take of isekai. It's really worth reading .

Unknown here, love the story. System: are you sure... are you sure you sure real sure... are you sure sure sure😂

A magnificent read, love the fact that his system was muted. Make sure to put your all into this story because it is gold.

i like the fact that he only sees his system now, but I do feel like the chaps are kinda lengthy.

A bit lengthy but an enjoyable first read.

Great beginning chapters, love how the story gradually gets bigger and the tasks become harder.

Unknown here, the transition from temple diver to transmigration felt kinda confusing but I am well intrigued and interested to reading more.

A great start, I would recommend ironing out your tenses. All and all the novel is a great read.

Great build up, it feels weird having this paragraph when you mentioned his mom's death. Maybe end the chap by mentioning that his mom died.

The sequence of events with the bag were a bit confusing, and the chapter feel short. You could gradually increase them.

Unknown here, great start, I feel like writing in past tense is something you could look into.

I knew it looked familiar!!! Nah it's not, you improvised upon it but the resemblance is kinda canny. I say role with it, looks mad hype and bold, grabbing reader's attention.

Absolutely a great story. The diction is next level and the plot gradually broadens. A story I would well recommend.

It's pretty good, next level diction I must say. It's funny how the cover kinda looks like i became the pope so what.

Thanks for your thoughts on the story. As far as what happens to the characters, you have to read further to find out.

Oh, don't mind me, just shamelessly reviewing my work. It's pretty good, you should try it out.