The start is shaky but it gets better later on! (Though it has less than 10 chapters as I write this) Author-nim plans to write this for a while. I can't wait how this develops, especially since it's inspired by Yoo Joonghyuk

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Also, though the synopsis makes us curious, it mostly tells nothing about the story. I just wanted to point that out

The writing and story is so... surreal. The first few chapters were the main lead looking at Earth's evolution and during so, he feels like he has lost significance as a human. The way the writer writes is so out of this world. For a moment, I wonder if this is how God feels, looking at us forevermore, knowing we are doomed for infinity

good chapter

I imagine she has a British accent😹😹

The writing is excellent. The way the writer structures their sentences is wonderfully done. Though, there are still sentences, or rather idioms that don't make much sense. Also, the fight scenes! They are great. They are not too detailed that it's excessive. It's . just right. I still have yet to finish reading it though but so far it has been good

good chapter

The prose is undeniably captivating, drawing the reader into the narrative effortlessly. However, I must admit that the pacing feels a tad leisurely for my taste, and I would personally appreciate more intricately detailed fight scenes to heighten the excitement and intensity.Nonetheless, the story shows great promise, and I understand that it's still in its early stages. As they say, you can't fully judge a book until you've read it in its entirety. Despite my minor reservations, I genuinely believe it holds the potential to be a compelling read that's well worth exploring further.

Strong start.

The writing is impeccable and the plot is interesting enough. Not my cup of tea though.

It is quite well written. The plot goes smoothly.

It definitely has potential! But the writing style is too choppy

oh my gosh this is so good. the way the story develops just pulls you in. the characters aren't like flat cardboard. and the writing is wonderful

Wonderful writing. Interesting story. .

The writing is marvelous but considering this is webnovel, it would be better if the paragraphs were shorter. The plot is common but the author has done it in a way that is unique. Spectacular but three chapters a week isn't cut for webnovel

decent writing. I love vampires so I was excited to read this but it hasn't been my cup of tea

interesting plot but there are too many noticeable grammatical errors

so much grammatical errors just work on those