BoredCrow

Good point but i'd of liked something interesting a power unique to him like how tusk and crazy diamond function

Ah yes how wholesome :(

Potential, but not really good if you make it less of a diary and add more humane conversations solid 4.

I am so happy the two best power systems in media ever combined into one story AH. I love this so much please keep up the good work take your time and value your health.

Unexpectedly good for a webnovel. I'd say it has potential to grow but his hiding of power is somewhat irritating, necessary but annoying. Good character development really gives off the vibe of someone who is kind of tired of the whole edgy backstory thing but still goes through a lot. Very good writing for a webnovel fic so 5/5 no complaints.

Hope that hiruzen dies off soon so we can get some people that don't just want to manipulate him.

Dude please put this on originals or something this seems very high quality and that deserves money.

It has potential like many others have been saying and for the love of god don't ruin it. make the people sound *human* and not like ai generated crap.