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Kaptagon

Kaptagon

Lv14

Wanderer of forbidden lands and beyond...(lol)

2023-03-19 đã tham giaTurkey
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon1d
    bình luận

    *my guess* his attack inflicts some DMG to ogre, then MC gets pounded, before he loses consciousnes he devours blood of ogre and evolves while being in camatose state and wokes up as a demi-god lol

    Ch 58 Life
    Baki: Martial System
    Tranh châm biếm · The_HonorableGhost
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon3d
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    it would be cool if he punches ground and stop a minor eathquake( if he has hanma bloodline even if just potential of it he should be able to do it plus smart atoms..)

    He will never fly, he will never throw a meteorite back into space, he will never punch the ground and stop an earthquake, ok? I wanted him to be able to grow beyond peak-human of that world. There are so many people who just give their MCs the Super Soldier Serum and I didn't want to do that. My MC should have a minor healing factor and some protection against diseases (Smart Atoms). 
    Robert I Baratheon
    Diễn sinh tác phẩm · DaoistWDfd8h
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    Kaptagon6d
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    if he can get ogres blood after kaku kaiou vs ogre then it would be awesome

    Ch 46 A Euphoric Ascension
    Baki: Martial System
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon6d
    bình luận

    thank you for the chapter! This fanfic needs more frequent update..

    Ch 3 Travel
    The Unkillable Sellsword
    Diễn sinh tác phẩm · Daoistz1VV3s
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon7d
    bình luận

    need New CHAP

    Ch 4 Chapter 4
    With These Hands
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon8d
    trả lời A_Guy_Named_Night

    Not my place to answer but, according to ability info yes. Does not matter his strong a mob or adventurer as long as lvl GAP is not more than 1 he is invincible to direct attacks. Still very much killable though.. one can create a vacuum or trap MC in water also negating dmg does not mean G force( i assume) so if someone is strong enough to make MC swing yoo fast Via impact or an attack he can suffer damage.

    "Yeah... to think that he possesses such strength. You know, Asfi, Niall reminds me of Silence when I look at him closely. Now that I have seen his powers, I can surely say he's a male version of her."
    Danmachi - Eldritch Apostle
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon9d
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    needs a rewrite with longer chapters and this fic lacks something but i cannot put my fonger on it...

    Ch 48 Are you all liking this fic?
    RE: Black-Light
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon10d
    bình luận

    +1

    Xiao Li
    Baki: Martial System
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    Kaptagon12d
    trả lời Kaptagon

    normally writing quality is not GOOD, needs better portrayal of situations etc BUT you said you are a newbie so it would be unfair ti rate it below 5 star ( cuz i can see you are trying go improve).

    INFINITE MONEY - I Will Buy Everything
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon12d
     công bố

    Soo.. yeah i bought privilage and read further novel chaps, you made some Info dump chaps dude and most people does not have "patience" to read through it BUT it is okay since you seem to be a new face in this business... Here is an advice about how to make better "Info dumps":you can distribute infos and write them part to part and integrate them to the story(this aldı adds some mystery but repetition of this method is a bad thing cuz it gets predictable and bores reader) rather than gibing Info in its bare form you can make us "feel" it through mcs pov( let MC explain it part bu part what he sees or feel of new continents structure for example, let him COOK) other than these, characters are still lacks some depth(as expected cuz story barely started) story needs some timekip and he needs to buy that physique thingy, if you make us wait too long it will lose its importance and that aspect will get boring. Update rate is great. Mc design is also good but needs improvement, we have seen some thoughts of MC about his past but no character developement(New continet ican be the reason of it) writing quality is good. Thats all for now, i shall return for a 3rd review once this novel is at chap 120+.

    INFINITE MONEY - I Will Buy Everything
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon15d
    bình luận

    thx for chapter

    Ch 7 Chapter 7
    Exploring the Multiverse
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon17d
    bình luận

    this fic is awesome, a real gem for me, i hope you dont drop it Man..

    Ch 44 a promise. (edited)
    Monster in a world of heroes and villains
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon19d
    bình luận

    noice, thx for editing status man! Cloak was a must

    Ch 24 Depart
    Danmachi - Eldritch Apostle
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon19d
    bình luận

    despite its minor short shortcomings, this is a great fanfic. Hope you dont drop it Man, thx for chapter.

    Ch 43 ok this is... (edited)
    Monster in a world of heroes and villains
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon20d
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    thx for chap, no matter what MC says, losing cloak ability was a MASSIVE debuff, sure in fırst levels it is just a strong skill but önce he reaches 5+ lvl he would have become invincible...

    Ch 24 New Status
    Danmachi - Eldritch Apostle
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon23d
    trả lời BigPapi

    Nah, if ROB could so it while possibly being stronger than what MC could hope to achive he can surely do it.

    I sighed as I wondered for the billionth time how worried she must be about me. If time ran back in the True Universe at the same speed as it did here, then it would be nearly nine years that I was missing. I hoped dearly to the one true God that she hadn't done something to herself.
    Chaos has come to Orario (A Seven Deadly Sins X Danmachi SI story)
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon25d
     công bố

    Has potential but need more frequent uploads. I will update my review once there is 30+ chaps(if this does not get dropped).

    With These Hands
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon28d
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    See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

    Ch 33 Chapter 33 - Three Choices
    INFINITE MONEY - I Will Buy Everything
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon28d
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    "You keep this up, I'mma knock you out right here and f*** you till you wake up. So unless you want to become a plaything, I suggest you leave right now." I said only so that he could hear. His eyes widened and met mine through the slits of my helmet, ice cold and hardened. He was so unnerved by it, all he could do was politely take his teeth I offered back to him and walked out of the building without making a sound.
    Orario Records of Bastard Cheating Minecrafter
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  • Kaptagon
    Kaptagon28d
    trả lời Mr_Manic

    And IAM DIO!!!

    "Oh well, too bad." Ganesha said before he yelled back. "My offer still remains open if you change your mind. Good luck young man and may you find fortune in this great city of wonder! I AM GANESHA!"
    Orario Records of Bastard Cheating Minecrafter
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