Kaptagon
Wanderer of forbidden lands and beyond...(lol)
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it would be cool if he punches ground and stop a minor eathquake( if he has hanma bloodline even if just potential of it he should be able to do it plus smart atoms..)
Not my place to answer but, according to ability info yes. Does not matter his strong a mob or adventurer as long as lvl GAP is not more than 1 he is invincible to direct attacks. Still very much killable though.. one can create a vacuum or trap MC in water also negating dmg does not mean G force( i assume) so if someone is strong enough to make MC swing yoo fast Via impact or an attack he can suffer damage.
Soo.. yeah i bought privilage and read further novel chaps, you made some Info dump chaps dude and most people does not have "patience" to read through it BUT it is okay since you seem to be a new face in this business... Here is an advice about how to make better "Info dumps":you can distribute infos and write them part to part and integrate them to the story(this aldı adds some mystery but repetition of this method is a bad thing cuz it gets predictable and bores reader) rather than gibing Info in its bare form you can make us "feel" it through mcs pov( let MC explain it part bu part what he sees or feel of new continents structure for example, let him COOK) other than these, characters are still lacks some depth(as expected cuz story barely started) story needs some timekip and he needs to buy that physique thingy, if you make us wait too long it will lose its importance and that aspect will get boring. Update rate is great. Mc design is also good but needs improvement, we have seen some thoughts of MC about his past but no character developement(New continet ican be the reason of it) writing quality is good. Thats all for now, i shall return for a 3rd review once this novel is at chap 120+.
Nah, if ROB could so it while possibly being stronger than what MC could hope to achive he can surely do it.
And IAM DIO!!!