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Not going to lie this chapter could use some work. 1. He should have been caught up real fast but wasn’t because plot 2. Why would the Loki familia care it’s the dungeon people die all the time 3. Him fight was irrational worse case they have a he saw him arguement 4. The gun idea is kinda lame 5. Why lie about having a familia

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The magic system in this novel goes completely against what is told in the original story.

You don’t know how the Eragon magic system works do you?

Probably went something like this: -knock on door -hear nothing -‘is he even home’ -*uses byakugen to checks* -sees he not there and then he is = he probably has teleportation