Yeah, the original translator translation is horrid, so I tried to do it myself.
It's clear that the original translator either doesn't bother to edit his translation, or are just plain suck at it, or is just simply copy pasting the mtl translation after putting the raw in google translate
The best minecraft fanfiction ever made, for those who love minecraft, just trust me on this, try to spend 5 minutes on your life to read the first few chapter of this fic, and it would get you hooked.