InvictusKyrielight
Reading aways was my favorite way of passing time, a way of experiencing fantastic things that can both ground and distance us from reality, It can use fantasy to bring new perspectives into our day to day problems, or simply be a way to relax during troubling times. Now I plan to try my hand at writing, thanks for reading this. Wish me Lucky!
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InvictusKyrielight8 months agobình luậnWhy he is always picked by surprise? Shouldn't his "magical" ADHD prevent this.
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Why does he have eyebags? In his mother domain he should be at his strongest and most comfortable. Like Percy in the ocean.
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He sounds whiny in this paragraph.
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Pressure. Seeing someone you know being held as hostage can be a "small bit" terrifying imagine.
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He is imitating his father...
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He is 12
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Thanks! Good work.
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Thanks for the chapter! Greek gods will be Greek gods.
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Why does he have the scar? His healing factor should leave nothing behind. I know some people find scars "cool", but is a little inconsistent, or he also have a terribly scared belly?
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Thanks for your work, great story!
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