hehe, he's a 15year old kid👺

noted😁

Like how the writer has deviated from the usual web novel novels and tried to make a unique, different story. Look forward to how the story turns out to bee

thank youu😁

I've made the necessary changes and made the volume named, Prologue. Also added some info in the Synopsis. it is supposed to be fast as it gives a brief overview about how the world works. The Prologue will end at chapter 7, by then, I feel you will understand what the story is about and then it will start at chapter 8. 😁

did the editing 👍🏻

I'll add the information about soul weapons in the world building and power system chapter to make it easier for everyone to understand.

the last name of siblings is a typo, will correct that. The soul weapons aren't ranked as they depend on the affinity one has with mana. also why the reporter just died, I'll explain it again. thanks for pointing it out

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Pretty good concept, the grammar is proper as well. I like the dialogues and lines used in different places- Look forward to what happens next. Best of luckk!

Love how the story goes, pretty good dialogues

thank youu

Quite an interesting turn of events in the story, I like the story idea. Especially the synopsis sounds pretty inviting! Look forward to more chapters 😁

Great read! I wonder if the main character will be evil or like the villain or will soften up while living with his new family. Look forward to more chapters!!!

thank you😁

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The grammar is pretty good and I look forward to reading ahead! Added to my reading listt. The plot was prettty interesting. as well :>

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read more to find out🫂, also I'm in the process of editing all my chapters and will be re uploading them as i said in my latest chapter from 10th June 😁

I've edited the synopsis you can check there, reading or not is totally up to you. no hard feelings.