Mt406

update?

I'm enjoying the story so far, but i feel like the MC is basically a mini Danzo. I hope he can make some sort of connection with another character and not only think about himself. Also, in my opinion, the use of explosive tags is over used.

the story has potential, but there are too many elements from other series other than Yellowstone that don't fit well. like the Sons of Anarchy affiliation, for example. It makes the flow of the story jumpy and hard to follow. It would make more sense to just have him operate a bar in Bozeman and be part of the dutton family, not have him be some underground drug king pin at 21 years old.

the singular "eye wide" was clever and got a chuckle from me.

we seem to be moving farther and farther away from the harry potter world and more into the nonsensical cultivation side of things.

Why do you have the comments disabled on patreon? Either way, the last quarter of ch.43 was crazy!

it's your story, but personally I don't like one peice so I would leave it far away from this story. gojo is already op enough for marvel cinematic universe. this is just my opinion and shouldn't stop you from writing the story how you want to.

So far, so good, but there is only 1 chapter. I've been hoping for a story with this plot for a while. Just please don't go down the route of killing off his family for the sake of "character development"

why couldn't harry see the thestrals? did he not see Hermione and his parents die?

nooooooo! Don't break my immersion! I imagine this story in an anime version, not a live action version.