LotusZT

This guy has some good stories i like so i’m looking forward to this. Is there a female lead?

ong just spend the whole chapter glazing bro and his powers/counrty

tbh 2 chapters a week and they are not back to back makes me want to drop this fic. shit is taking to long

bs. they wouldn’t know of the multiverse and shit. just say you are in a seperate dimension or from the universe

tbh i don’t like selene and this roundabout game he is playing with her and natasha is becoming old pretty quick. let natasha know he knows she’s shield and let selene prove herself and earn blood from him

no hate or anything i was just wondering. you are like one of the few Authors who does Tv fics to my liking

bro where is the mc? that’s what we are here for not some rando fatty named Todd. I literally skimmed this entire chapter not seeing the mc once then moved on without fully reading it. Fuck Todd he is not important, just the mc and the 2 girls cast

holy fuck! if i had to read all that then this novel would have been dropped very fast and i’ve read a lot of trash on here. Brother Author, you are doing gods work making this as readable and enjoyable as is

i don’t know why but this chapter felt pointless like you are trying too hard with Max that it’s becoming unlikeable

going through my naruto fan fic memories and canon story, Madara should be dead by now so mc is chilling on that note. he either died before nine tails rampage or like a little bit after