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I will check it out, thanks for taking my constructive criticism and hope you continue to grow as a writer. Good luck😁

As much as I enjoyed this book, i can't help but feel disappointed, it started out strong and midway it began to feel rushed. It has an amazing and captivating storyline, this book could have easily been 500 chapters and wouldn't feel like it was dragging instead it would have been more fleshed out, and could have reached it's full potential . I really love the charactes and wished the author put more attention on characters like ozais, lux and even xaloc family, like what happened to them? , a lot felt unfinished. At a point the book became all tell and no show . The war and final battle was beyond disappointing, the author just told us the battle was hard and ares, Selena and the other guy died nothing more, and the revenge fell flat xalox didn't even kill nora who practically killed him in the beginning. All in all so much wasted potential especially the school arc, the romance was the only saving grace and it felt rushed too but i like how mature it also felt.

i have never even spoken to mine😂😭

you may look pretty but trust me your character is pretty ugly 🙂

It's reminding me of that witch from saving the overbearing ceo, do they ever learn😂😭

pls, it's giving Nigerian schools😭😂

Exactly, assassins shouldn't be this trusting, actually no one should be this trusting.