Wesam296

AMAZING, I hope you continue with a season 2, there is still a lot of potential! What is the enlightenment stone, the system, more interaction with his loved ones and disciples and a lot more.

Also, why complicate things for some weakling organization or sect? Hasn't he had enough realizations about the world? Why waste time and chapters.

Isn't this supposed to be a wish fulfillment novel? Why is it full of tragedies and breakdowns?

R18 scenes are getting really long because of the filler scenes and repeated stuff but in different words man, I find short scenes better, maximum 3 chapters, because the power and story are more interesting

It kinda makes me sad the more he develops his power and character and doesn’t make me feel the thrill that he is becoming stronger with the price he has to pay , becoming a heartless leveling machine is not what i think would be good development ,even more ridiculous is that he will become deaf afterwards , then what? Become a cripple ? he himself doesn’t feel the thrill of becoming stronger anymore and that he doesnt feel love for the childhood friend and all the others after the stayed with him even though he was not being emotionally involved with them is also quiet a bad development, quiet sad if you want my opinion, otherwise the world and stuff like that are nice.

Umm, the novel is really amazing in my opinion and has great potential, but it is kinda taking too long to start with the world and development and stuff, because until now I have noticed that the chapters are like 35% info dump, 20% describing the room or the clothes or whatever, 25% s*x scenes, and 20% actual story development and stuff, I would really like to focus more on the development because it becomes kinda annoying when I read a new chapter everyday only to find that 50% or something of the chapter is just info about whatever something he is using instead of just a simple description, makes me want to leave the novel until it accumulates like 500 chapters to have a decent read and get a decent development. But hey I love the story in general and can’t wait to see him being OP against the people who will find out how strong he and his family are later on, that’s why I keep waiting wanting to see what’s going to happen, but it just doesn’t go that way in the story, or it is just not moving on to see how he is going to make the city his the chamber of commerce workings or the sect and stuff like that you know. Thanks for reading my opinion, and sorry if you take offense to my criticism. (English is not my native language, so there may be grammar mistakes here and there in the comment, so sorry in advance)

Why is this novel becoming worse the more i read? It was amazing with op mc and fast advancement in the cultivation levels and a system that gives him advantage then all of a sudden there are stuff that cant be advanced with the system and we start to get bulls*it about unstable foundation whereas before he could advance as much as he wants without side effects. I feel like most if the chapters are fillers with nothing to do with the story.

Good luck at work then, I hope you manage to get some free time for novels in the future.

I hope you give a bit of time for this novel too, it seems you don't have much time cuz you have multiple novels.

AMAZING NOVEL, it is one of the best i have ever read, i hope you still make a new novel about their adventures in the tower as the Gemini Brothers and their path to the peak or what yet lies beyond and what the tower is preparing many strong people for but also not forgetting and ignoring their family as that left kinda bitter taste that we didnt get to see familial ties between the kids and their father.