ObsessedNovelist
I contradict my own name, pay no mind to it.
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Thank you for this comment. You're right, I should take a step back and refresh my thoughts about the series when I first read it and that is what I believe I am currently doing. I went back multiple times within the manga to reread for the sake of this FF but I should go back and read for fun. The reason I'll be taking this 'break' (although it is more of a stop) is because currently I feel much more relaxed and am having more fun with my new FF. No worries, this FF in general needed a revamp because I rushed some parts like the beginning and the revenge. The first part was cut and rushed too abruptly and the revenge didn't make much sense as the beginning was rushed. this time (after I make my new FF) I'll be taking my time and not rushing. Like I said within this update, this particular FF makes my head hurt and lose motivation due to the bad memories associated with it and how I gave myself unhealthy goals even though I knew I would never reach them. Overall, thank you for this comment as it shows that at least a few readers truly liked this FF of mine, so I give you my thanks.
If I do indeed do this (which I won't), not only would I have to make them a twin of one of the others due to how Rei Yozakura and Momo Yozakura named their children (which still would make the story vastly different due to having to make entirely new names for everyone), but that would also take away the uniqueness of Alpha and Hifumi Yozakura's situation. But thanks for the input! Always love to see readers asking questions, feedback and the like.
For this, I am sorry to say, but even with my plans, he won't be stronger than all of them combined but he will be like Kyoichiro (which he is heavily based off of if you couldn't tell by his reactions with Sinclair) in the sense that he is stronger than all of them individually. Of course, this is at the end but at the current present the Yozakura with their Someinine (a cheat might I add) is much further than him.
El mc tiene la misma edad que ella. (Google translate)
I forgot to say this but, in the new chapter I basically predicted Asa... He not only created his four 'children' but my main character fits a tad too well with them... lol... I'm a prophet? Anyway this'll make everything much much smoother in the long run.
Yello~ It's me! The Author! Like all my predecessors and future writers, here is yet another shameless Author review. I don't think I did the best with this, especially with the hazardous updates but you know. In all honesty this is more like a three stars in my opinion but my next one will be better. Eh, give it a try, if not, and you want a more lewd and 'raw' Yozakura FF go onto wattpad and search for Bloomguard (I didn't personally read a lot so it's up to you). Besides, I'm not the only FF in this website, find something you like to read. Fun Fact: Bloomguard and this FF actually started in the same month this year, lol. I was ahead by like a week or so. Crazy...
Sure why not. A guy wakes up in a kids body tries to survive winter by stealing and eventually almost dies but Doctor saves him. As soon as he wakes up he's inside his mind dying to a cold blizzard then wakes from it and kills a psycho kid trying to kill him. One month later he kills another kid (who's a trap). Afterward he and the remaining kids go and take down a 'small' gang. He gets a sister afterward before they all get brainwashed and get sent to Makoto. Five years later he wakes up and escapes from Tanpopo's current HQ and is taking the Silver Rank Exam. (I just noticed the amount of typos in previous chapters...)
Rather than a picture, I'll give you guys a description. It's basically Stein's soul (from Soul Eater) but instead of a wisp at the top or the nail, its completely circular with a large iron shackle surrounding it.
For the lazy people who don't wanna do the math, it's when he was 18...