Novelist12

I think it would be great if you could describe these scenes some more.

The gift that keeps giving. Keep up the good work.

Please no! I am having a bad feeling about this.

I have read all 6 chapters so far. I am definitely hooked. The writing is flawless, and descriptive. The story is developing well. I am hoping the MC is not playing it safe all the time. Looking forward to more!

Yes some action!

Nice start, good scene setting!