Ngl I’ve thought about this comment for a month now. So when making the newest chp I had your words in mind and try to redirect it as constructive criticism. I am a first time author so I may not be able to convey pacing all that well but rest assured there is a plan lol. And regardless thank you for taking the time to read my work that means a lot, thank you [img=Smitten]

I see I will check that out, ty [img=recommend]

Yeah I agree I think I’m lacking when it comes to world building do you got any novels to recommend for it I wanna fix my newbie writer habits

Haha pretty much it’s Polish for New Life

I totally forgot abt that lol the lack of sleep getting to me

Alright thank you for the review and suggestion [img=recommend]!

I’ll try to fix that but thank you for the review

Thank you! [img=strong][img=coins]

Coraline Jones Vs. Coraline Hugues haha

Whoa long review [img=gift][img=coins] tysm [img=recommend]

It’s the prolgue bc it’s a time farther into the novel but ig I could change it as I continue writing

Fixed ty [img=recommend]

Long chp author I say make a pt.2 for it

Acá venga!

“What do u think of the name Zero Dreams, honey?” …“Great idea!”

Good start only complaint is split long paragraphs [img=recommend]