Jessica_Brown11

Your not that good of a writer. So please leave Webnovel. You make my eyes hurt just reading your story.

Both the story and the translation is very poorly written. Neither of them makes any sense.

Can someone please tell me if this is a good fanfic or not? I've been dying to read a good Star Wars story. And I only read the first chapter of this one. But I don't know if it's good or not because of Rey.

What in the world a fanfiction of Spiderman and Wanda Maximoff falling in love? Whatever happened to Mary Jane or Gwen Stacy? I'm sorry but this story doesn't make any sense.

your writing is a waste of time and energy.

This is my first Star Wars fanfiction to ever read. So please bare with me. I'm just giving you a five star rating to be nice.

I'm not a huge fan Star Wars. But I'll read your work.

Thanks for creating this story. It's really good so far. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍.

So Rey as a apprentice of her own now. That's pretty awesome. And she treated Cale Lestin like a little brother even though she was mean to him at the beginning of the story. But she eventually grew to like him.

Wanda Maximoff finally has a apprentice of her own. Not only that she trained but also fell madly in love with. And his name is Travis LaRowe. So please keep up the good work author.