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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Grammy

    Well, it's a scar. The wound is healed but it left a scar.

    When I woke up I could see that I collapsed on the floor. I got up and started eating the food scattered on the floor. I leaned against the wall and began disinfecting and bandaging all my wounds. Thanks to my devil fruit I had a higher pain tolerance and regenerating capabilities. I finally unlocked armament, even if it was out of pure luck.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Dragon_forever

    Who knows...

    Ch 13 The "Free City" of Milazzo.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Dragon_forever

    Exactly!

    Ch 2 Hoof of The Soaring Dragon
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Petang

    who knows ....

    "Crap! It's the black shirt pirates, run!" a member of the crowd exclaimed. The crowd soon started dispersing in different directions.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Reaper2504

    In the original draft he was Jun. I forgot to change it.

    "He's our new cook, Jun." Sora stated.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời

    Oh, mb.

    "He's our new cook, Jun." Sora stated.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Reaper2504

    Yes, he could have black bones.

    My physique remained the same after all this years, I had lean hard muscle, I wasn't to bulky, but not to thin. An overall athletic physique. My fighting style also remained the same. Fast and powerful sword srikes or punches. I gave up on my plan to use the staff as I found out that it hinders my movement and it isn't worth wasting time to learn a new weapon fighting style. I still generated a katana made out of reinforced bones as my sword. It never failed me after all.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Upcoming_Region

    I realised as well. I'm trying to make it longer. It's also my first book so it is pretty hard!

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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Pingui0510

    You got me. That was bs.

    While I wasn't fighting, I began trying to feel the other slaves using observation haki but I made no progress yet. Saint Sharlia began parading me around the holy land, she was bragging to other world nobles about how strong her slave is. I was even allowed to accompany her to a slave auction. She told me that if I ever lost a battle, I would be killed and all the other slaves would be forced to fight the beasts. My body also developed. I got taller and I began to develop some muscles. I had a swimmer's build. Not to bulky to not hinder my movement but really powerful. I had a perfect mix of power and speed. I still have 3 huge claw marks on my chest. No matter how hard I tried to fix the scar with my devil fruit power, I still couldn't find a way to get rid of the scar, same goes with the celestial dragon slave mark.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Pingui0510

    He didn't go as far as killing a person. You can be really cold hearted, but killing a person for the first time still is traumatic.

    My sword made contact with his neck and his decapitated head flew in the air. The crowd burst into cheers and shouting. I had just killed a man... I didn't feel anything... Am I a monster?
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Bloob

    Thanks fo the advice! I'll ask all the readers in the next chapters and see what they say too.

    I was a genius, one of the smartest humans to ever be born. I had everything I could want: wealth, fame, power. But I still didn't feel anything, my life was emptier with each passing day. I was a serious, cold and pragmatic man, people were scared to talk to me fearing... I don't know. Shame? or maybe embarrassment? I was alone until the end, a gifted orphan with no parents and no friends.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Bloob

    I have another question for you as you seem experienced in novels and such. Would you like smaller chapters but with more frequent uploads or longer chapters with less frequent chapters?

    I was a genius, one of the smartest humans to ever be born. I had everything I could want: wealth, fame, power. But I still didn't feel anything, my life was emptier with each passing day. I was a serious, cold and pragmatic man, people were scared to talk to me fearing... I don't know. Shame? or maybe embarrassment? I was alone until the end, a gifted orphan with no parents and no friends.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời

    Sora is my mc

    I was a genius, one of the smartest humans to ever be born. I had everything I could want: wealth, fame, power. But I still didn't feel anything, my life was emptier with each passing day. I was a serious, cold and pragmatic man, people were scared to talk to me fearing... I don't know. Shame? or maybe embarrassment? I was alone until the end, a gifted orphan with no parents and no friends.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời _Hachiman

    Thank you for reading!

    Ch 10 The Start of the Battle!
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời _The_Emper0r_

    Tomorrow!

    Ch 10 The Start of the Battle!
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Bloob

    Yea but Sora has an also fairly normal body shape if you ignore the slightly abnormal height(203cm)

    I was a genius, one of the smartest humans to ever be born. I had everything I could want: wealth, fame, power. But I still didn't feel anything, my life was emptier with each passing day. I was a serious, cold and pragmatic man, people were scared to talk to me fearing... I don't know. Shame? or maybe embarrassment? I was alone until the end, a gifted orphan with no parents and no friends.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Hyzouille_Gr

    Yea, but he also has a lot of things to worry about, like not dying in a gladiator battle. He will get that sorted out later so don't worry! Thanks for the advice!

    I feel that I am also starting to slowly forget the storyline of One Piece. With no notebook to write down what I remembered, it seems that I will completely forget the world building and maybe even some important events.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời xXyan

    I still don't understand why we are debating this, it is an anime, it doesn't have to completely make logical sense. And I also don't understand your point, are you saying Shanks is a regular guy?

    I was a genius, one of the smartest humans to ever be born. I had everything I could want: wealth, fame, power. But I still didn't feel anything, my life was emptier with each passing day. I was a serious, cold and pragmatic man, people were scared to talk to me fearing... I don't know. Shame? or maybe embarrassment? I was alone until the end, a gifted orphan with no parents and no friends.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Bloob

    We have never seen Shanks full abdomen and biceps. How do you know?

    I was a genius, one of the smartest humans to ever be born. I had everything I could want: wealth, fame, power. But I still didn't feel anything, my life was emptier with each passing day. I was a serious, cold and pragmatic man, people were scared to talk to me fearing... I don't know. Shame? or maybe embarrassment? I was alone until the end, a gifted orphan with no parents and no friends.
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  • xXyan
    xXyan1yr
    trả lời Hasan_Shopnil

    The main focus isn't romance, it's more like a side story.

    Ch 4 Snake Princess
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