Floxy_Belle
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It's quite interesting, but there are some things you should take note of. Firstly, try to express your characters properly. Give them more emotion's This enables a reader to connect with them better. Secondly, there are a few mistakes that can make a reader confused. Also, you should write a synopsis for the story. Most webnovel readers judge a story by reading the synopsis. It is very crucial. Overall, it has a good 👍
It's a good book. I immediately got intrigued just by reading a few chapters, but you need to work on editing some chapters. There are few minor mistakes and some people might get confused. But overall I liked it. I'm definitely reading more❤️
This story is moving at a fast rate. and is quite enjoyable. It has a good plot and the characters are well built. I believe it's going to be a good story. Keep it up 👍