Vimbai_Murindagomo_9212

The first impression I got was that you don't proof read your work. If you do then you really need to improve on your diction. No offence meant but bad grammar makes it difficult to follow the story.

Thank you, much appreciated 🙏.

Everything about this book is on point. It is well punctuated with a beautiful story line. The plot is unique and a credit to the authoress. I love everything about this it. Well done authoress on producing an outstanding work of art.

Hi Emmanuel. Whenever you are write something in your vernacular language, it will automatically be underlined with a red line. That's because your computer's software is not designed to read non European languages. So don't worry about it. Just make everything else that is in English is spelt correctly and uses the correct tense.

May you can also review my book. Below is the link, Interdimensional, a starship trilogy link https://www.webnovel.com/book/interdimensional-a-starship-trilogy_28387111008851405

I feel you have a good story, actually an amazing story to tell. If only you can improve on your grammar as well as proof read your word before publishing, it will go a long way to enhancing readers enjoyment.

Thank you for the recommendation Chaos lord. I apptreciate the support.

Very detailed descriptions. I find the plot very unique and gives a fresh feel to the transmigration genre .

It gives me great pleasure to present to readers worldwide an unforgettable reading experience. So join on an epic adventure unfolding across several alien worlds dimensions, and timelines. I should warn you in advance that when you start reading this book, you won't want to put stop. I wish many moments of happy reading. Enjoy.

Thank you for the support. I promise you regular updates will be forthcoming.