LLagier

Yeah show em boi

Gimme more chapters dude

Lmao, shameful death 😭

For me it’s just an alignment problem, why make the FL the opposite of the MC ? It’s like putting pizza in front of someone, then dramatically adding pineapple over it and then handing it to them, simply not digestible, at least for me ig…

Damn

I reckon amber will smh read MC’s notes and see the other world part, that way their fates would be entwined (aka “blackmail my father. propose to me” typa stuf), i hope that wouldn’t be the case, kinda generic and holds no use for the plot.

Humanization slip up heh

At the time it probably was fair.

A paragraph before this signifying that the MC made an action or spoke something that reaffirms his claim would’ve made this a bit more well structured, BUT it still makes sense maybe you’ve just read it in a rush.

A cliffhanger…you better watch out Author cuz if i catch you, you’re cooked 🙏🏻