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Hello I am a fan of your story even if I regret that the chapters are not longer ^^ Small suggestion for an interesting react... what do you think about making the x-men, the mcu and mha react to the film logan release in 2017 ^^ the tragedy of Wolverine's death to save children in a world where mutants are hunted down should give interesting reactions! Best wishes
Very good chapter although I find that you speed up the plot a little too much at times... moreover I think it would be interesting if you deepened the moments when you show the points of view outside that of the protagonist (especially when it has a geopolitical impact) because that's what makes the charm of GOT. Moreover, it could be good for the plot that you create some difficulties for domeric because for the moment everything comes straight into his mouth without there being anything to do ^^ However, I have a question: Is the fanfic still active? (no chapter for two months)