agreed I actually kind of wonder how he's going to prevent them from spending your time resources and potentially put themselves in danger to get him another golden elixir pill if he's going to continue to hide that he's or do you reached that level

probably not.

so you're trying to convince me that this group of friends who knows how much you dislike the spotlight would publicize the fact that you gave them a gold elixir pill so does it really makes it feel like they know a lot about you but you know nothing about them

okay I get it you don't want to reveal your array skills I get it That's great. But you can tell that the array is almost finished why don't you just show up and help them break down the array give them the bloody golden pill elixirs you found and stop acting like they're your enemies. They are the ones who helped you get the first couple of foundation establishment pills .They spent at least 10,000 spirit stones to get you a safe location in the immortal city. They protected you when you were young What in the hell is wrong with him but at this point it's a mental illness. Like I get that he's helped them in the past as well but the amount that he's helped them in comparison to the amount Dave helped him is not equal. I bet that even if he asked him to pay for the pills they would He could just say he found an opportunity it's not like they're going to even suspect that he's done elixir refining. And it's funny cuz you see all the other Wednesday cater to him like they know he's a cautious person so they don't do events that would make him uncomfortable This is the most toxic friendship I think I've ever seen and one of these novels in which case a friend wasn't actually your secret enemy in a beginning of a story

I think it's because she's already 60 so whether or not she had to foundation elixir at this point It wouldn't matter she was still be past the age of 60 when she could try again cuz it takes two years to heal

people who don't want to leave a trace of what they're selling. potentially people who may have killed someone else to get the pills they have

I am calling him dumb but there is a point I guess where if he's transmigrated from a world where people don't just kill people at the drop of a hat it does seem somewhat realistic that he wouldn't immediately think that something bad was going to happen regardless of how many books he may have read or written on cultivation worlds

This is a pretty solid story. I deeply appreciate how federal it is in keeping all the plot lines together we don't have to worry about too many plots being thrown in our face which can make it difficult to keep up with the rest of the story. When the plots are resolved you can see the underlying story and conspiraciea coming together.The male lead and the female lead relationship develops naturally albeit a bit quickly ans they don't allow for miscommunication to drive them apart. I'll ignore the jealousy of the ML as he never truly lets it get in the way of the FL life and adds some humor to their interactions. The FL makes some moves that put her little too much in the spotlight considering she was reborn in a world that might label you a witch for possessing another body but it makes her seem more human that she isn't perfect at disguising herself as the original person. All in all solid story appreciate it will continue reading and would read again. Thanks to the author for formulating such a well crafted story

might have spoke too soon

well that's a relief he seems like a decent person. Don't want him to go evil on us.

hey yo chill my man you only met her like once you cannot turn to the bad side this easily

so did everybody end the story just lose their intelligence

I read up to chapter like 374 and let me tell you there is a second male lead added into the story which I didn't see coming and it doesn't make sense because Even when we were in that character's head he didn't imply he was actually attracted to Aubrey. secondly they have to dumb her down so much more than she already was in order to make it possible that she misses the signs that this person is in love with her it's insane

It really did have such potential I'm reading a little farther along in a story but like all of a sudden it feels like there's a ton of bizarre plots that have been added into the story I guess to add some suspense and it just doesn't make sense either she and her family are powerful or they're not and they keep on like hiding stuff from grown ass people for reasons I'm not sure of Like Charlotte got hurt and they're hiding who hurt her does that make sense

Yeah... no. at first I wasn't going to respond and then I realized  something you replied to only two negative opinions on this entire review page with an accusation of them not reading the story. But then I went and checked the earliest reviews four and five months ago.  I didn't see you complaining or making any comment about anyone not reading a story when the comments are praising the story, when they've only read 1 chapter, 11 chapters, 15 chapters,and 22 chapters or when they commented 5 months ago when you only had about six chapters out according to the site. It's okay if you don't like negative comments but it is absolutely hypocritical for you to make your attack of choice that the commenter didn't read the book to discredit them. That only matters to you when the comment isn't praising your story. You're telling us not to leave negative comments just because a book isn't to our taste but comments like ours are here for people who might like this type of story plot. There are a lot of stories on here and not as much time as people might want to read them. If I had come across your book and had come across a comment like ron1n's or mine I wouldn't have read the story because it's not my style and then you wouldn't have had my negative comment on here. None of the other reviews on here tell me anything beyond the most generic vague praises about how good the book is and that true love conquers all and how romantic or strong willed the leads are. Those reviews don't help me figure out if this book is going to be something I won't regret reading. So I  have to go and read the first 26-40 chapters trying to get an idea of what the story is and if there's not enough information there then I cannot spend coins on 100 chapters and hope that the rest of the book will convince me to like it.

I want her to stick to Leo because quite frankly all the others concern me. The group of friends seem to think of it as a competition against each other once they realized the others were attracted to her

especially considering how long it takes

I'm dying a little bit because the idea of them being able to make a suckling pig inside of that villa is absolutely hilarious

It is infuriating and he fact that her manager and her assistant work together to violate her privacy like that would have any normal person firing them. it's always surprised to me when these type of characters never seem to have any concern that their boss would immediately fire them for something like this

Rafael isn't the male lead is he? His attitude is concerning