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Just keep reading lol
Every quirk has limits, but imagining death is possible.
Drool with envy? Really? Simply “filled with envy” would’ve sufficed
After saying “…Jason’s gear was all epic quality…” use a semi colon before describing his gear.
Another grammar error
Using the apostrophe is not necessary anymore and you also incorporated it wrongly.
You’ve already made it clear that it is a game, no need for repetition. Also, there is an error there; Jason played AS a grand mage
First things first, why don’t you have a synopsis?
I look forward to that
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