uhhhhhh you'll see

I decided to take up your word for it and actually start improving the chapters

power eaters are made of pure energy they're not really a living entity they are it's just during a constant state of eating and consuming their energy and there isn't really a superior species of them because they're constantly evolving Matthew could do that and I might include it in the story. but it'll be very brief

long time since I've been an author which is why you see so many grammar errors.

ooh on this chapter or some other chapters if so I will try to fix them sorry for the mistakes

oh and by the way I don't like harems or any romance in my books so don't expect to see that

yeah I hope you like the next chapters and I wasn't really sure if you actually like the story based around your comment felt like you were a little disappointed at something of course I would like to know what that is but if you don't want to share it's all right

Actually, I don't know why I did that I was just like hey this part will be very boring so why not just have a little fun in there, I'm going to do an oogway and say "it was the will of the universe"

ooh ok

he can do a lot more I'm just trying to figure out what abilities to give him

why what?

just like how he didn't invade his mom's mind to figure out what was happening he doesn't like messing with people's head that's part of the reason you don't see memory manipulation even though he can do it

ummm what was that comment about exactly?

uhhh maybe but don't expect much

thanks.that was actually really helpful even if you don't believe it so and the reason I like my comments is because I just thought why not.

yeah, currently he has Prismo level wish granting powers, 50 times stronger then the 10 tails and—let's not spoil anything.

yeah I understand the confusion but he's the 11th tali.he basically wished to be like the ten tails in the sense that he wished he was like a tree like a bijou tree like the ten tails and then like because he absorbs so much chakra he became the 11 tails instead of the 10 tails.

it's already there buddy

sooo how was it was it a good parallel to your store or was it not.did you like my name protagonist or did you not tell me everything.

bro first off you don't know who I am so I have no idea why in the world you would decide to comment on my story.and second of all this just proves to me if you have this much time in your life to come on here in this website to insult a story then you're nothing going to waste of space in your household.do the dishes watch your little brother go to the movie do something like oh my God imagine being so lazy and having so much time you're coming on this website just to insult me.unlike you I have a whole book written under my name kid and I have a lot of other accomplishments so do not come to my story to argue with me okay.and second of all my dad is not an abuser I don't know if that was how your dad or your mom was but my family was not like that.and I'm not in the closet and if you're hating on a story like this it shows you're somebody who's already out the closet.so please bro get a life.because unlike you the reason I'm unable to publish stories is because I don't have a lot of time on my day.and it's not because I'm going to school it's just I have a busy life.I do stuff online and in my house and the only time I get to publish any chapters on my story is the times that I do get.so please bro leave your gay self out of my comment section because nobody likes a hater.and it's sad that you have this much time to do everything but to grab a Bible go do the dishes wash your baby write a story or do anything.stupid people like you say the message like you or the reason why authors quickly being authors.