maniac_008

Absolute bullshit. Good idea but unfortunately written by a Chinese writer who destroyed the actual one piece story in less than 5 chapters. God only know how you can add bullshit to one piece's simple power system.

A really good fanfic. Enjoying it a lot!

This story has a good potential, though it is very slow paced. The update speed is very bad, hopefully the writer picks up the speed.

Really good job done by the writer! Loving the story. The only issue is the really slow chapter updates. Will have to keep this story at the side and come back after a year or more. Hopefully the update speed picks up.

I must say, a very good potential fanfic idea turned into absolute bullshit. I found the author giving one excuse after another continuously trying to justify his stupid actions. If you do not know anything about Marvel then don't write a fanfic related to it. Waste of potential.

I am really enjoying this fanfic. Only thing that frustates me is the slow updates. I want more.

I will be honest in saying that the novel is so loved and liked mainly because of the sports part. From my point of view the sports part is whats the most interesting part of the novel. I believe the majority of the readers consider this novel mainly as a sports one. I may be wrong, but anyways, just putting out my thaoughts. P.S. Still love the novel and will continue paying extra to read it. Just find some forced scenarios to be frustrating from my point of view as a reader.

I will be honest here, just because the novel takes place in Japan, there was no need to add the yakuza and gangster mix vibe to the story, especially when it is a sports novel. I feel that you are forcefully adding more unnecessary things and drama into an already well made, outstanding novel. I can understand giving a character a gangster background who has retired, but thats it. It is so pointless and stupid to make a completely different scenario just to make unnecessary problems for Ken when this is a sports novel. It feels like the author is purposely pushing other problems and situations on just because the MC Ken has a system so as to give trouble through other angles.

Author I get that the system is a big help and I understand that Ken feels like its a cheat. But you cannot randomly keep making him still doubt himself even after 400+ chapters. Its time you once and for all make him completely at peace with the situation and remove this mental burden. Its already too late to keep bringing it up. It is frustrating when this topic suddenely comes up in the middle during fun moments in the story.

How the hell is the mc considered OP if he cannot even beat a demon. Stupidity.