beast_eater

are you fucking kidding kidding me? He's still an 11 yo bitch after 290 chapters????? I'm only on 80 and fed up with this shit

This was really fun and interesting until the author decided to go all supernatural power/god mode on the story, it completely went to crap and the whole purpose of the plot disappeared. It's like it transformed into an action story, complete waste. Digging through 300 chapters of trash for nothing.

This was going well until the earth got destroyed and it starting getting stupid. I would give it a 4/5 before that, and a 2/5 after that. But the WORST part of this story is the author note at the end of EVERY chapter, the dude doesn't know how to STFU.

240 chapters in - Adult chapters: 3.

no, it doesn't. "a child who's parents are dead". you aren't a child at 20.

Out of the 340 chapters I've read, 335 of them were about the Demon Lord of Chastity. What was "R18" was so badly written and boring, I skimmed it. author has to be a virgin or a eunuch to write it that poorly.

Please stop. I read this offsite and had came here just to leave a comment. Please, just stop. This is 100% terrible. I can't believe you even had the balls to lock this behind the paywall, and even more shocked after just 6 chapters.

Author, please give up. This is just terrible. The conversations suck. The characters suck. The writing sucks. The smut sucks. It all just sucks. Please give up and do something meaningful with your life instead of wasting it away here.

Just look at the other reviews. this story is shit. it's so poorly written. each chapter can literally be condensed into 3-4 sentences, the author just repeats the same thing multiple different ways. This is such a time waster, and the smut is worse than the plot.

This shit was pretty good until it went all "gods everywhere" bullshit and starting spewing all this random god crap. Drop it all and go back to the Urban Plundering part. We don't need all this extra bullshit to make you feel like a real author. Just give us what we want.