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Keep it up and TFTC

This is actually well put... Like sometimes when I read a fanfic I usually don't like it when they make the story OOC like when I was reading this I was hoping roshi's perverted action would not change but as the story progressed I changed my mind and I like how to character development is going. Overall 8.7/10

Carne village lol 😆😋 it can mean Meat Village in English depending on the language

Apple 🍎 That's all I could say other than the author slow updates but I do think the author could just... How could I say this maybe 🤔 fix the viewer's comments?, Nah that sounds wrong maybe the right word is improve it cause it feels dry... Like the Sahara desert overall decent good grammar and the character act their personality good not like an ooc

Your weird you always comment on other person's comment .w., But I guess that don't really matter? But I do agree though on some of your 'Recomendation'.

Hmm... This makes me think if the MC picks the first option, I would have think he would either investigate the kamakura project and maybe make the reserve course student content in the school?.. I don't really know there is a LOT of ways the MC could prevent the "The Biggest, Most Awful, Most Tragic Event in Human History." being removing Junko Enoshima would be the obvious one... But from what going from the story I think Junko is a potential GF? Dunno keep it going mah guy

Yoo... That's crazy, I just listened to that song before reading this chapter..And I must say the instrumental is good and their language in Brazil as they sing it is good, It's my first time hearing a Brazilian song and bruh it was about The coffin of Andy and Leyley so... I guess not many people will like it or understand it cause some people don't know the game is about.

Wise man one said.. If one thing end in a failure adapt, overcome and improve, May your writing skill get better and create high quality story.

Nicely done on how you cooked that alpha wolf wannabe guy the fact that he didn't ignore what your pointing at chapter 27 means that is his reason why he called mc a cuck... Like damn, Did he not have a loving father?, Any normal father would comfort their sons and daughters... I'm getting tired at those people like I get that he hated beta or cuck (I don't know why this even exist maybe some people just thought these lable affect reality or something like... I have enough of these people they need to stop reading too much alpha thing stuff...)