DarkiAntiArki

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KMS

Reverend insanity?

Idk if I should, over the year I’ve written some and on a whim dicided to post them.

You switch between 1st and 3rd person. Try to stick to one or the other not both. Also it feels like your just gonna rewrite the original story, with minor deviations to have a stronger mc.

Why a system, why be Hansen

Completely butchering itachis character, ranting and filling chapters with pointless and repetitive ai generated details… Thought I was in for a cold calculating protagonist, not an emotionally driven child stuck pondering his irrelevant past.

U baiting now?

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