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Fongletto

Fongletto

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  • Fongletto
    Fonglettoa year ago
     công bố

    Read up to Chapter 150. Fairly average read suited more for younger audiences. Other than the MC having the standard mary sue tropes of automatically having everyone like him and constantly falling face first into opportunities there is nothing particularly wrong with this novel. The writing is average, the combat, story, adventure, world it's all very average standard stuff. Don't expect to be enthralled and unable to put it down. But you're not going to be annoyed you immediately trash it either.

  • Fongletto
    Fonglettoa year ago
     công bố

    This is very well written. It was enjoyable read overall and definitely worth a read through. The whole world is completely built out with every character being masterfully designed and written. This is easily one of the top novels ever written. With all the positives said, after the first book (which was 10/10 amazing) I found myself enjoying it less and less. At some point the abilities become so ridiculous and nonsensical that trying to understand it becomes pointless as the clear rules that were established in the beginning kind of all just get thrown out of the window. The ending was also a very big let down. The story does move quite slow for those with short attention spans it could be difficult to digest. All that said, I definitely recommend the book.

  • Fongletto
    Fongletto2 years ago
     công bố

    I read about 300 chapters before dropping. It's hard to give this a bad review and find faults. It's also hard to give it a positive review. The author has imagined a very thought out world. The detail and description and history and races has been considered and perfected to a very fine point. The authors writing style and quality is fine, and while the side characters are not perfectly fleshed out they are also not generic. The problems only really show because the story development is all over the place and it feels like the author doesn't really know where he wants to take the story. In 300 chapters there is very little to no development or room for improvement. The MC never faces challenges or has any pressure to grow or change. The Author can't seem to decide if he wants a system story or a virtual video game world story. And somehow in both worlds the MC is an omnipotent god. Overall this novel is good to have something on the back burner while you're waiting for other stories with a more fulfilling plot. But if you're looking for something that gets the heart beating and as satisfying and complete arcs go elsewhere.

  • Fongletto
    Fongletto2 years ago
     công bố

    Very fun read. It's a story about a guy who's very strong but thinks he's super weak, and how everyone around him misunderstands what he does. Obviously the premise wears pretty thin after a few hundred chapters as there is only so many ways you can use the premise before it becomes repetitive, but the first 300 chapters are very addicting.

  • Fongletto
    Fongletto2 years ago
    trả lời Copperhawk

    Was going to read, but I hate sociopath MC's and I hate time skips (second only to flashbacks), so thanks for saving me the time :)

  • Fongletto
    Fongletto2 years ago
    bình luận

    See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

  • Fongletto
    Fongletto2 years ago
     công bố

    Great all around novel. Author does a great job and the story remains interesting up to where I have read at 400 chapters. Characters have their own personalities and the protagonist doesn't become brokenly overpowered in the first 10 seconds. The story is well written an engaging and it's hard to put down. It offers a good mix of action comedy and adventure. Readers should know that the title of the book is pretty inaccurate and is closer to 'trading hub/city keeper' than 'inn keeper'. As it doesn't really offer any powerful 'inn' functionality. And instead seems to focus on extremely powerful effects that seem to have nothing to do with an Inn like war games. And while this doesn't diminish the quality of the book at all, in fact I think it's better because of it, just know that you wont get that hard focus like you will with other profession based systems. If I had to nitpick one con, the author has a penchant for breaking the 4th wall with remarks about themselves/plotholes/popular tropes or snide remarks about other stories (even if they are true). Which can really breaks the immersion and jars you out of the story. However there is only a handful of these comments throughout the entire story so you can pretty quickly get back in to it.

  • Fongletto
    Fongletto2 years ago
     công bố

    Standard cultivation novel. A cut above the rest in most aspects but not outstanding. It is still a passable read after many hundreds of chapters though which is a difficult task for most authors to pull off. So on this aspect alone its a worthy read.

  • Fongletto
    Fongletto2 years ago
    trả lời Magecrafter

    It's not a harem novel in the sense that they never really 'seal the deal', but it reads as such in every other possible way. In hindsight my review was too harsh as the beginning was very enjoyable alone and that in itself warrants a higher review. But when you have something you're enjoying and it suddenly changes drastically you tend to focus on the negatives.

  • Fongletto
    Fongletto2 years ago
     công bố

    Decent concept, Interesting characters that are mostly fleshed out. It has some of the small issues of a boy with the mind of an old man not acting his age from time to time. However overall does an above average portrayal of this compared to most authors. However things very quickly go down hill because the author decides to do a massive time skip. Removing basically any chance the main character has to grow both in power and emotionally. I stuck with it to around chapter 500 because I genuinely enjoyed the beginning and was excited to see the growing phase. Unfortunately the author never really managed to capture my attention again after this. The writing is not very gripping or suspenseful. Like sure there is "supposedly" some sinister plan going on in the background. But there's no sense of urgency. The villains all fall flat, and the author doesn't really do a very good job at holding your interest. The whole novel reads closer to a slice of life with a harem of underage women than anything else. Overall I think boys aged 15 and under would find enjoyment in this story as it reads more like a harem of underage characters than anything deeper. Overall I'd say great characters and world building but terrible execution. Definitely a below average read.