Hibah_Siddiqui
Newbie writer. Just publish the first novel. Into NFTs. I'm also an artist and a graphic designer. You can check my paintings here: @hisiart on Instagram. Currently pursuing a BSCS degree at university.
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I always appreciate new writers because I'm too 😁😅. Actually I'm serious because I know how hard is to keep writing and writing and see no to little appreciation or motivation at first. How hard is to find people who point out your mistake to make you more better. Author, if you ever find someone who demotivate you and told you to back off, don't ever listen to them just reply back with F*** off. 😎
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I can imagine his face clearly 😘... Thanks to your detailed description.
Ooooo~ I never give a chance to vampire stories before but after just reading the first chapter of your novel, you change my mind. I think I should give them a chance before. When I was reading your first chapter, I found it so smooth, I mean that reading wise I smoothly read the full chapter. That's a plus point from me to you. 😚😚😚
Dear, instead of "his body" change it to "His body"...
Your story is very intriguing but I'm confused about the gender of Orquidea 😅 maybe I found the answer later in the story I guess... Overall writing style is good. 😘
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Dear, just correct the little wording here from "you just think your all that" to "you just think by yourself all that" 😊 and when writing the dailogue put a comma before the end of the dialogue if haven't defined who said that. For example; "I'm fine, don't worry," he said. Overall love your story... and has so much potential 💖💖. Plz don't mind my comment, I'm also new to writing and many people point out my mistakes like this. 😊😊
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That's sad 😢. I hope the father actually cares.