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is this fic taken off platform, it always shows 'something went wrong l'.

let him have some basic knowledge, then +999

well, i don't know if you have seen the tiktok videos of women complaining about men stopping after they say 'No'. Most of the time even women don't know what they want.

+1

dude 5'11 isn't short, ok maybe in fanfictions he might be short.

i noticed 9 reviews, so i made it 10. good fic👍

what if he was talking about comics😅

i think it's about time jake gets a power up, he's basically a bully at street level and a jobber in front of any significant villain, i think he should get a new power or upgrades to existing ones.

he complains a lot, like a lot, its's getting annoying. more chapters and better pacing for the story, till now it has been a narration only

no, this is coherent enough, there are some fics that need a rewrite but this is not one of them. All you need is regular updates and future planning, so you don't write redundant chapters.