Sage_Paragon

Sad but I can understand, see you around.

And thx for reading. I appreciate it greatly well -- it's a fanfic so may be not as much as I'd on my original, but still it's nice to see (comments).

There is Avada Kadavra... so... I'll let yo think the rest.

No need to thank me -- should be me, well I don't want you to trouble yourself with such a silly hassle (I think). Though I'd like you to point out such things in future, been a while since I read potter and watched one piece. Rereading and watching -- well -- I don't have time for that, grinding for a job or maybe -- well we'll see in future. So yeah please do point out my stupidities here and there. Happy to see someone take interest in the story. Keep reading pls, there might be delays in chapter updates but there will be chapters for sure -- 3 days max -- I'll try at least.

Hmm... I see. I won't fix that but thank you for pointing it out. Well, I feel weird having to explain but here you go -- conqueror's haki was being oozed out of him -- unconsciously -- reason him being afraid and tensed. Hagrid waved away the haki and comforting his mind so that he can relax his nerves. I hope whoever is reading this have this clear in their mind, conquerors haki is power that only those who have free will and pure heart, while he does not have that but got it from god -- every med is to some extant is a poison.

You say that but do we know if Ron knows about Elves? I don't know if there was any mention of them and Weasleys were not as rich to afford an elf (idk) but Ron was not aware of them (dragons for his brother was studying them) and he I don't think read any book like Hermione.

I suppose him not being able to use magic and suffering twice as much compared to others along with having no prior memories of the world was already a great nerf. Him being afraid... there's a saying that goes like this -- people don't change, situations does. Haki being from the world of strong and giant overpowered beings -- I get your point but does having haki make it so that your nature changes and you become ignorant and unafraid main character with insane plot armour? I thought I made sure to tell the reason for is death -- suicide (pretty much showing he's a coward, afraid of hardships). Also him knowing the fact that he chose this world yet he's unsecure -- there are people who knowingly buy stocks and shares on trading market and are unsecure about it as well. That's human nature, so what if you know that your are taking risk you still fear failures and that's the beauty. .... This all is my first time communicating with someone I hope you won't hate me for my language and tone of expressing. I appreciate the fact that you at least read my story and criticised me in a genuine way which really helped me and reflect upon the mistakes I would've made in the upcoming chapter (3). I hope you stick to this story and I'll try my best to make you keep reading it.

Hmm... you won't find anyone more shameless then me. Though I think that rating is deserving. Well you can always counter with your ratings and reviews I don't mind but you can't change those five stars and 5.0 score of mine. ... In case you wish to fight? Here's my answer --