Sean_Tayobana_9151

i hope you don't drop this anytime soon because this is the only nani desuga fanfic

have a high potential,and i hope it has good execution and a somewhat accurate in the show but I don't know how accurate because i haven't watched the show yet but i hope this doesn't drop early

well it's shit of story, first of all the author can't even differentiate between a she and a he, second off all the characters personality is shit like real shit,for example the mc personality change for apparently no reason,and third of all the author want the mc previous lover a mystery which he did terribly at that,and that's not even the worse the worse is that he's so f#cking OP he acts like shit like he is probably the strongest yet he acts pathetically and the author is f#cking bias on the hindu pantheon

it's good it has proper build up and some twist which is great and it has proper dialogue good pacing and of course a likeable MC but i hope he doesn't go after Sicily but with maria as his lover. It also have good grammar and it's not confusing to read which in some fanfic cases are

well I'll say it has a potential i mean a lot of potential sadly it has poor execution no build up for characters, and super fast pace which is good if done right but like i say poor execution and no build up for the character's which is understandable because it'll probably be drop sooner or later i think but it's too early for me to give a permanent raye so I'll probably delete or change this if it got more chapter's