PageTurnerPJ

thanx for pointing out :)

I agree, but when you have written 150+ chapters already, going back and changing the beginning without affecting the other chapters is difficult. I am not sure whether I should concentrate on writing new chapters or fixing my previous mistakes. I cannot leave my very few patrons hanging in waiting. I hope you understand. But If you have specific chapter-wise suggestions, I am all ears. BTW, have you read today's chapter? It's one of my best.

she is clumsy and eager to impress others. otherwise she is good.

yes but using seals just for 2 people will raise suspicions in the eyes of someone like Danzo who has big time trust issues.

they have blood line and secret jutsu to protect. and there are 100+ people in their compound. Hamura has 2. and as per records they don't have any secret jutsu. general people will not find anything suspicious but someone like danzo would .

Yes, I'm doing too much too fast. Earlier, the readers were complaining the story was too slow. So I sped up a bit.

ohhhh

wasn't Sasuke in the Rain village fighting Itachi ?

autocorrect is b*tch sometimes

*Hokage. Thanks for pointing out.