Consideraré tus sugerencias y escribiré en consecuencia.

gracias por tu comentario

Well, I wrote it paragraph by paragraph and then used AI tool for editing because the editor with whom I used to work is now no more and I do not plan to get an editor sooner or later. But I hope the chapter feels good.

I am trying my best, I have my own lore into the current Elden Ring which will begin after the Lands Between. I want to research about everything properly before publishing a chapter.