cassiegreen
Hi, I'm Cassie. New to this app.
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you just had to😭😂😂😂 Trump😭😂😂
Why do you always cut these scenes😭😭😭
flung*
damn
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She's one to talk😂😂😂 She literally snapped at him so suddenly.
shet
That's true!!!!!!
Please tell me this guy's Marcel
He was right!!! She's a siren! She has magical powers😂💔
accurate 😂 This is the same guy that doesn't "feel" He is tripping😭😭🌚🌚 I'm loving this!!!!
These are my parents😭😭😭
my forehead feels uncomfortable now😂😂💔 specifically between my eyes😭
The story seems okay so far. I think the author has been doing great with descriptions. There are a few grammatical Ir maybe typographical errors here and there so a little bit of editing should be done. Now, to the story: The female lead is twisted. From her POV I envisioned her as a somewhat sweet and relatable person but from the guys POV my view of her changes a little. She is so sure of herself (I don't want to use the word narcissist). I don't really like how she just jumped into conclusions and mentioned things about his secual fantasies... yes she is correct but it is a little too much. She was downright rude. Plus the fact that she was in an office environmentt means that she is meant to be polite ag all times to all people no matter the situation. Maybe you should consider modifying it a bit. I'm not telling you to change your plot or anything but from my perspective, that scene would have been better if outside the office. Also, the people watching... the way you handled it made it seem like you were looking for a quick way to brush them aside. Okay... I'm done with my critics lolllll I did enjoy the book. I'll be sure to read more (your nook has potentials it should get better) and I hope you update before I get to the last chapter (as of now).
ever calmly and placid... ain't that somewhat repetitive?