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Where’s the rest is the chapter?!! I feel so cheated…
HILARIOUS!! Almost peed my pants laughing so hard!!
Ah! Grinning through this entire chapter!! Thank you author!!
Okay, I’ll admit I’m usually not a BL reader and the only reason I started reading this was because there was absolutely nothing else that looked interesting on the recommendation list for that day… but boy, oh boy, am I glad I did! (I even ending up spending a lot of coins on this! 🥲) great story, lots of humor, really enjoyable read! Thank you author for your hard work!!
YAY!! Another new story that is a lot of fun!! I’m really enjoying this version of “transmigrating into a book” - great humor, good plot - fun twists. Now, if only Ch. 32 & 33 were complete… not gonna waste more coins on advanced privileged chapters if those chapters are only 5 paragraphs long!! But other than that, great work author!!
AGAIN, WHERE’S THE REST OF THE CHAPTER?!!!!!
WHERE’S THE REST OF THE CHAPTER?!!!!!
SERIOUSLY?!! This chapter is 5 paragraphs? Ouch!! My heart!! 🥹
This story has such great potential. The little twists to an overused “almighty FL” are really good and it’s engaging. However, the grammar is atrocious (although I have read worse) and the story is told in very“broad strokes” lacking detail. I’ll keep reading because I’m curious how it will end but I’m a little sad about how much room there is for improvement.