Tanya_Allcorn

So I think someone said it before but I’m going to repeat it. If you are reading this you need patience. Because the plot is good. Shout out to the author you should work harder.

First I would say the author did a good job for a first time story. The writing is good and so is the plot. But I think you should work on your world background. So far the book is amazing. Keep it up and grow.