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Are you telling me Yelena did not hate the absolute guts of Leon for ruining her opportunity to become a Black Widow? Thats a plot hole right there, but imma look past it

the author is high on something. Thats for sure

My impressions after reading 1 chapter is this: I'm still trying to figure out if this going to be more intrigue and focus on interpersonal drama or are there going be things that would interest me. I am curious to what god game to make him live such long life. And about what else he could do. Would I say I got hooked? Sort of. Hooked enough to see through a few more chapters to see if it's my cup of tea. Would I say its well written? In comparison to stuff I have read, it's quite good.

Haha yeah, Still figuring out the pacing of things. The goal for the pace is to be a bit of a mix between fast paced weekToStrong novels and a little chill sliceOfLife novel. It's a little bland right now because MC is alone in a forest, but things will pick up soon.

I don't know if this is really a spoiler. I am marking it as such, just in case. The story is going to be a multiverse travelling novel but it's not going to come in play for a long time. Most likely going to be 1 world for 1 volume instead of going through each one for a few chapters. Also there will be a mix of my own original worlds and fanfic worlds. I won't say more than that. We will see as it goes.

Hey! Doing the usual ritual of rating myself. I don't know how often I can update the story, but I can do 1 a week at the minimum. This is my first serious attempt at writing a novel. Although my English is not as good as I would like it to be, I can say it's better than those bad translations. I love world building as I used to be a DM in some dungeons and dragons' games. The pacing of the story would be somewhere in between fast paced week-to-strong novels and the lighthearted slice-of-life novels. There will be times when there is a growth spike and some other times when MC tries to chill out and does some shenanigans. I am open to feedback and ideas. Though keep in mind I will have the last say as I am mostly writing this for myself. I will incorporate your ideas if it aligns with my goals for the story. But feel free to through in whatever comes to your mind. You never know what sticks.

you took a smart and hard working scientifically curious and business minded MC and turned him into someone that thinks laws of physics were a roadblock and magic give a middle finger to physical laws. It could have been magic has its own laws that interacts with physical laws and that MC is curious to research about magic. No, of course that can't happen. I was so hyped to see the possibility of scif and magic being mixed but I don't know. But I'll read few more chapter to give benefit of the doubt .

was quite good at the beginning. MC was smart and cunning. But soon he turned into a pervert retard. Don't get me wrong. I don't mind smut novel. But why turn a perfectly good novel into smut novel out of nowhere? It became neither this nor that.

I read the original on other website a little. I like the story but horrible translation . This to me seems like fan fic of it. it written better also has its differences. This one clearly ain't written by some Young Master, I tell you that much.