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excellent must read!! the best Pokemon fanfiction to read!!

the story progression is very good it nice mystery elements in it.the world background development is also excellent.The character are well. i hope this continues through the story

the story is going good excited to see what going to happen next .

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the story is awesome !!!! the edit was nice it made introduction to the story better .

this is very well made with nice storyline hope it continues !!

it very gooood the Pokemon fanfic i ever read!!!

it is very good and awesome nice novel .

good it is very nice....................