PrimDragonGod

I found the first chapters of the novel captivating and promising, but unfortunately, the last chapter published, chapter 9, bored me. It killed my desire to continue reading. In the end, the fact that the author stopped writing lessens the loss I would have felt if I had enjoyed that final chapter.

I know a lot of authors who made really funny stories, but in the end didn't bother to finish them. It's always frustrating when a captivating story remains unfinished, so author, I hope you're not one of them because your story is really good and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

I give 5 narrows to motivate the author. The story is good.👍 .

I love this story at first I thought the main character's lack of interaction with the new humanity was going to make the story really bad but this story was really good, and especially I love the ending but I would have liked to see them explore other universes or even explore an existing cinematic universe like Marvel or DC it would be really cool.

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Author) as Artoria builds a church, she could use avalon as her divine domain.

Seriously, at first I loved this story. But the more this story progresses, the more it really becomes a mess. We don't really see the primordial vampire we expected when we started reading the story. And then she accepts that her servants do anything to her, give her poison, forcibly puts her to sleep more than once.

Author) as Artoria builds a church, she could use avalon as her divine domain.

The plot is decent, but the MC is 90% of the problems...................................................................................................[img=en colère]

This concept is brilliant I hope it won't be abandoned....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................