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Or cursehood

I think we need more in depth back story rather than just as plain as his father just seeking power. That will be bland and boring. What I want to see is that why he chose power and left his children alone, and what was his reason to Abandon his children. Not some old bull…. Like he is messed up in head or born evil or loss of emotions. Just some paragraphs of explaining his emotions in upcoming story like he didn’t love mc and his bro as much as he loved hesta firstborn or some meaningful story please 🙏 don’t spoil it by ‘just born evil’ cliches author

I think he is becoming origin will

That’s what an author needs to avoid right Every chapter should make us eager for next chapter not stack it till we get bored with rest of the novels and then start this novel again,

What I meant was we currently have branching storylines here like story with his mom, dad, sister. Then finding vessel for his bro, then is territory ancient ruin then untamed jungle itself, then the empire, then his curses, now his fluctuating emotions. Finishing those side stories in between can create ‘feel good’ effect for us on this ride(novel) I was hoping for that 😅

The thing is he hasn’t even explored untamed jungle and the ancient ruins, now second territory with another set of unknowns!. Well the story is getting broad by each chapters like nest super human alliance and now second territory The story should pick up the pace even more faster now or it will become boring author!!, due to small chapters and the amount of coins we spend that couldn’t satisfy our curiosity of this story development

Likely a twist! I think 🤔 💭

Next info dump I think 🤔

This has a good plot but author is petty enough to make long worded names of some items and status view repeat too much to fill the words count and too much duplicate chapters (feels like a scam to me as some people just buy chapter in bulk if they like a story and some chapters don’t even have decent story but only status view) so instead of consistency this author is trying something else ……. God bless u for ur future endeavours author

It will be like nest holds their family tied up to their ‘cause’ or something like organisations grand purpose