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Really good novel, i hope for more :). I like this style, because the mc is not op from the start and has not every skill and ability. Its more about how good ur control over one ability is

Eyy, its fine i think nobody would drop a 10/10 novel from the beginning the progress will make u better and as an viewer i have little to no intel about how hard it is to write a novel by myself, so just keep going and i think with time u will greatly improve 👍🏼

I rly like this story. Its a special novel for this kind of genre with greek gods and other story dev. Its not tooo crazy and u will love it, if u like mmmmh the typical genre stuff. For the first story of a new author its rly rly good. So i hope u try it. AND i hope the author keeps going and uploads more frequently. I know the upload thing is rly hard but i have to read this whole novel :) 😭😭

I rly enjoy reading your story. Keep going, iam actually rly sad that this is the end for today. BUT i hope u keep going with this!!! [img=update][img=update] 8/10 story so far. I personally like this story because the chracter is balanced for this kind of genre and not super super op, because there would be no fun in reading.

but the author and this books have lots of potentials because the idea is really good. Just improve the writing, better english more simple structures. More character dev and side character and logical emotional events. For me it feels like the author has an idea about an event and shortly after sth the next event follows—> slow progress in one direction

and i have to agree thatother characters arent well introduced u get little to nothing information about other character so this will just slow down the whole novel. No connections, no emotions nothing…. its just boring

I like the character building, skills and world building, BUT the story is tooo complex, writing is rly bad, sometimes even after reading it twice u dont understand whats happening. So sadly i drop this. 3,5/5

Sorry but this novel is trash. Firstly there is too much information and the author alwys says he will describe it later. This is just dumb. Then the language skill is really low. The idea behind this novel is good, something new, but the implementation is just bad. Sometimes u read and read but it feels like the author writes about something only he knows and u cant follow the plot… Sorry but this is my first time i rate a novel with 1/10

same. For real i do not know but i keep to erveryone a distance even to my parents. Thats crazy but cant change that.